by Katie Silva Jul 29, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I cant breathe |
by Andrea
another good one! |
by Sean Allen
The last two stanzas were my favorite. The first stanza seemed a bit off rhythm-wise, since some of the lines are so different is size. But the last few stanzas were nice, and I thought the last two, though long, really did a good job of summing up the feeling of the poem. |
by Lindsay
Very nicw work Katie! I liked this one as well. |