Comments : Without You

  • 20 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Very nicw work Katie! I liked this one as well.

  • 20 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    The last two stanzas were my favorite. The first stanza seemed a bit off rhythm-wise, since some of the lines are so different is size. But the last few stanzas were nice, and I thought the last two, though long, really did a good job of summing up the feeling of the poem.

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    another good one!