by Katie Silva Jul 29, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
So young |
by Andrea
i love the 4th stanza! great job! |
by Sean Allen
I like how you mentioned how you didn't want to be selfish. I'm sure some people who have contemplated suicide have thought of it as a selfish act, but most suicidal poems I have read don't really mention it, they usually just mention the act. Good stuff. |
awesome job! |
by Marta
That was soo deep and beautiful. So nicely written and you described all that you were feeling so perfectly. Awesome job, keep writing! :) |
by Lindsay
Very Nice poem. |