i really agree with ashaveer. i can't believe you've never shown anyone these poems! they're deep and beautifully written. i would never think of this! keep on writing, welcome, and take care:)

Very Nice poem.

That was soo deep and beautiful. So nicely written and you described all that you were feeling so perfectly. Awesome job, keep writing! :)

awesome job!

I like how you mentioned how you didn't want to be selfish. I'm sure some people who have contemplated suicide have thought of it as a selfish act, but most suicidal poems I have read don't really mention it, they usually just mention the act. Good stuff.

i love the 4th stanza! great job!