Comments : The world we live in...

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachael

    Okay, I LOVE the closing line...."Not one of us will appreciate the damage we have done"....I'm not sure if you meant for there to be a hidden meaning...but it was excellent....Great job, definitely a 5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ava Milan

    Brill poem

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Last stanza was superb...excellent write 5/5