by Katie Silva Jul 29, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Tears of regret fall to your death bed |
by Andrea
the flow of this works so well, good job! |
by natasha
so beautiful |
beautiful. it really touched me, i think because i can relate so well to it. there have been so many times that i wanted to just trade places with someone so they didnt have to go. you did such a great job with this one! |
by Sean Allen
Argh, once again a very sad poem. The AA BB rhyme worked pretty well, considering it can become dangerously cheesy sounding when used incorrectly. I guess you used a bit of poetic license by changing the rhyme scheme for the last stanza, and that is totally fine. Good poem. |
by julie
excellent, lots of raw emotion, well done! |