by Ten Feet Tall Jul 29, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
She told him it was over |
by *~Vanessa~*
This was great!! What a twist at the end. I thought she was gonna kill her self as well. Excellent job. |
Great job. The only question I had was about the last stanza, I was a little confused by it... Was she carrying someone elses kid? So she was cheating too? |
you had me fooled i thought she was gonna kill herself i was all into it lol good poem it was deep |
even better than the first which was definetly deserving of a 5..this one deserves so much more than that, keep up the good work |
by Katie Silva
i agree with holly, its intense. very powerfull! i love poems with a lot of emotion to back it up |