Lol, i like this poem, its really godo and i liek the double standered...unless i read it wrong or something {no doubt i did} i love al lyour poems and i shall continue reading, i may not coment on them all, but i certainly will vote. :)
-Mortalidaga

This was excellent!! I really liked the intensity!!! Great job!!

i agree with holly, its intense. very powerfull! i love poems with a lot of emotion to back it up

even better than the first which was definetly deserving of a 5..this one deserves so much more than that, keep up the good work

you had me fooled i thought she was gonna kill herself i was all into it lol good poem it was deep

Great job. The only question I had was about the last stanza, I was a little confused by it... Was she carrying someone elses kid? So she was cheating too?

Excellent poem!

This was great!! What a twist at the end. I thought she was gonna kill her self as well. Excellent job.