by Raychel
i don't know how u could say that's not good, lol your other work must be absoult perfection! i was engulfed the whole time. great poem! |
that was an excelent poem . i liked the use of vivid languege and thet toughts it expresses... keep it up ur a wonderful poet .... thanks for leaving coments on my poetry its nice to know what people think :-) |