That was very sweet!!! Great job!

Incredibly beautiful! That is such a cute and sweet love poem. I like your style, and thanks for your comment. It means so much. :) Good job

awww tenn feet tall, thats amazing :*) your so talented! and i know you can go very far with it :) i believe in you <33 awesome work, keep writing :)
-Mortalidaga

That is a very warm and touching poem.

VEry sweet love. I see you have lots of talent. I would surely come back to read more of your poems. Keep up the good work.

Cool as ever!...loved it!!!!!!!!

oh wow! i really love this poem!! i can relate to it! such emotion! i love it!

I really liked the rhyming that you pulled off, it was very skillful. However, this line:
Thou sound of you laughter,
didn't make sense to me. Is it supposed to be "The sound of your laughter," ?

yeah, "the sound of your laughter", i noticed that after i submitted it, but now i cant change it for a few days. sorry if i confused anyone else.

Excellent poem. I'm kinda feeling that right now w/a friend that i love so much in not just as a friend but more. He's actually the one that my poem I Want to Be (which I believe you have commented on) is written for. I only wish I had the guts to show him...but anyhow excellent poem.

I really like this poem also =D But then again, I like a lot of your poems, so..yeah