Wow..this is really good!! I especially liked the ending!! Gave you a 5!

Ohh my God, this is such a wonderful poem, hun, you're gifted... I wish I could write like you... Its really difficult for me to express myself... Actually I relate with your poems... This one, I mean, this poem is how I feel now, I feel the same way n, eventhough I've tried to express myself I cant... Im not as good as you... Besides English is my second language so... lol, I hope you get the chance to read my poems, I really do... Thanks for taking your time to read my comment... Keep up the good work...

that poem is beautiful..you have such talent chloe..please dont stop writing..<33
-Mortalidaga

I read this a long long time ago, but forgot to comment. That was absolutly beautiful. So sad :-( It breaks my heart to see you so depressed. As all your poems are. Keep your head held high sweetie.

Much Love,
Danielle

You write such wonderful poems, they are all sad, and they are all about you. I hope that one day you are happy.

Megan §

Omg i LOVE that poem,. you're an awesome writer!