U dont understand(about suicide and cutting)

by ashley   Jul 30, 2004



you don't understand why i do the things i do i do them because of you.
i have to hide my arm because of your horrible charm i fell for the act and we made a pact that one day we would run away but that all ended the day i showed you my scars of the days i was hurt and how i delt with the pain and you said i wasn't sane and it was over in a flash i was home in a dash looking for the blade because u played with my heart so I'm laying in the tube waiting for the end the blood is pouring out now and i feel so alone but the end is near so i have the fear its all over no more pain no more hurt because you never understood

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  • 20 years ago

    by Alison

    It was great! Except it kinda confused me at parts, you should put some sentences in there instead of it being one paragraph :)
    Thanx for commenting mine!

    -luv Ali

  • 20 years ago

    by *Elizabeth*

    Hey
    I thought your poem was very powerful and from your soul. GREAT job!! I cut also and know what a vicious cycle it gets u caught in!! But we can be strong and get through it!!!
    I wish nothing but the best!!!
    luv elizabeth

  • 20 years ago

    by Traci

    wow that was a great poem it all ran together smoothly. Keep up the great writing can't wait to see more of your work.

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