Comments : The ending of the fairytale

  • 20 years ago

    by Keri Ann

    That poem is . . . perfect. Great job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Mimed Lovette

    THis makes me sad, I could relate to these emotions and I think the way you wrote it would be able to make your readers feel your pain too. Heartbreaks are hard to get over, and the time doesn't matter. As long as you still remember, those memories stick forever.