Comments : Watch my fly

  • 20 years ago

    by a bUi

    lol thankyou karen

  • 19 years ago

    by R F


    Wow...I was amazied !!! Where were u hiding ? : )

    Excellent writing,i loved the title so much,n i thought that the ending was so briliant tough !

    So i dont want to hear u saying that u didnt make ur own mark !!! Coz u did ! this is a great mark too : )

    Peace,
    Darla

  • 19 years ago

    by R F



    So enjoy ur 5 !!!
    coz u deserve it.

    and thanks for spending ur time n reading my simple poems,keep in touch by writing n commenting : )

    Peace,
    Darla

  • 18 years ago

    by Andree

    Loved it !