Comments : Falling apart

  • 20 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    nice rhythm and even nicer to see something on the inspirational side from you - its a change because your so talented at painting a dark picture with your words - i think you've got that down pact - this is different really original and i appreciate it for what it is...you did a good job (again) and i look forward to seeing more inspirational work from you :o)

  • 20 years ago

    by Semaran

    Yeah life is an ironic world is it not. I wrote this one when i was in such pain i knew i had lost oine of my closest friends forever my greatest love.. She is still in my life but a mere shadow of our friendship exists. It is heartwrenching to lose a great love but it is destroying to lose great friends