by Ten Feet Tall Aug 1, 2004
category :
Life, society /
other
With these hands I can play. |
Inspiring. Might I add that you seem to do a fine job w/your hands....k that sounded kinda wierd. But still, good poem. |
Shorty i love this one.awesome!!!!!!! |
by SarZz
Came back again....i mean...read it again....its superbz! |
by Jacki
Awesome! I loved it! |
by Sean Allen
The repitition was great, and helped establish a solid rhythm. The idea behind the poem was pretty good, not necessarily an original idea, but written from a specific point of view, which made this poem very "you", so to speak. I definitely liked the ending stanza. |