by Lydia O
This is impressive, Ten Feet tall. I give this a 5. I hope that your optimism and upbeat outlook will spread. |
wow, ten feet tall, i love this poem, its so meaningful..i lok forward to reading more of your work :) <33 |
very "handy" poem! Nice poem. |
by julie
different, but it works excellently, well done ;) |
by SarZz
Dashing.....dats all i can say.....btw....u really ten feet tall?....lolzzzzz......nice work...keep it up! |
by Lindsay
WOW! So original! I loved it! It flowed very nicely and this poem had a meanigful touch to it! I really look forward to reading some more of your work! Great job! |
by Katie Silva
very nice poem. I like the wording! good job |
by Sean Allen
The repitition was great, and helped establish a solid rhythm. The idea behind the poem was pretty good, not necessarily an original idea, but written from a specific point of view, which made this poem very "you", so to speak. I definitely liked the ending stanza. |
by Jacki
Awesome! I loved it! |
by SarZz
Came back again....i mean...read it again....its superbz! |
Shorty i love this one.awesome!!!!!!! |
Inspiring. Might I add that you seem to do a fine job w/your hands....k that sounded kinda wierd. But still, good poem. |