by unprotected lover Aug 1, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Will you miss me when Im gone |
by Jessy
i love this poem tho it is really sad i am sorry yu heart must be broken but i love this poem!!!!! well buh bye |
by Jessy
i love this poem tho it is really sad i am sorry yu heart must be broken but i love this poem!!!!! well buh bye |
thanks for your comments it really helps me change my writing and give it a little more feeling |
by paperdoll
Nice opening (and obviously closing) stanza, quite satisfying. You might have dragged on the point a little towards the end (especially with the repetition of the word "blade") but other than that, great imagery. |
thanks belle |