Nice poem, and you can't really copyright poems. You just stick a © next to the title, tell evry1 in your profile that your work is copyright, and chances are, most people won't be stuffed copying. They can of course just write it out, but my work's not worth that effort, i reckon.

thanks belle

Nice opening (and obviously closing) stanza, quite satisfying. You might have dragged on the point a little towards the end (especially with the repetition of the word "blade") but other than that, great imagery.

-paperdoll

thanks for your comments it really helps me change my writing and give it a little more feeling

i love this poem tho it is really sad i am sorry yu heart must be broken but i love this poem!!!!! well buh bye
hold strong!

i love this poem tho it is really sad i am sorry yu heart must be broken but i love this poem!!!!! well buh bye
hold strong!