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by Leah Aug 1, 2004 category : Special events / wedding
You put each other in a trance And show your love in its expanse With something simple as a glance May your affection be everlasting. You keep each other safe and warm Protect each other from the storm Love could take no truer form May your devotion be everlasting You see each other as no one can Your journey seized hand in hand Together over sea and land May your companionship be everlasting. Your friends have joined here today And family have come here to say Each in their own special way May your love be everlasting.
by Leah
Please comment on my poem!!!!! I wrote this for my dad and his fiance for their wedding. I really hope they like it. I would really love to hear what you think. I wouldn't mind some constructive critisism either.