WHOA! That was beautiful DAMN that touched my heart - my Dad is in the military and that poem really hit a soft spot - my poor mother thru all these years! Thankyou for helping me open my eyes a lil you did a truly wonderful job with this poem

Eirisa,

Thanks for the comment. Yeah my dad is in the military too. Ive always thought about joinin but as the years go by i decide not to because i dont know what i would do if i never made it back and i dont want my kids or wife to live how my family did. And no need to say thank you i just write what i feel. Again thanks for the comment.

This was so amazing.......God it truely touched my heart. I have been trying for the last hour to try and write a poem dedicated to the soldiers who every day risk their lives and I am having some difficulty so I wanted to read some of other peoples to see if anything hit me. Nothing has!!UGH!! lol I just wanted to tell you this is such an excellent poem.....Take care and God Bless

OMG i love your poem so moving
luv u
great work

OMG!! That was amazing. It brought tears to my eyes. There are so many people out there who have to go through the same exact thing. My uncle was killed in Vietnam, so my whole family can relate to that.
Take care
Jessica

Omg. I got tears in my eyes. wow. that's such a good poem. keep it up. 5/5.