by Erica Aug 1, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
first love
I was sad one day, with a broken heart, |
by Perry
I love the rhymes. They really rhyme perfectly. Word of choice is excellent. I used to know the true meaning of care, trust and love. But two years ago, I lost my way. Everything just went downhill from there. Recently, I found myself again. I realize I've been asleep for a long time. |
by Live WeLL
This poem is sooo sweet.. i love it.. its amazing .. the flow is great .. the whole story and meaning.. i love it.. excellent job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =) |