This poem is sooo sweet.. i love it.. its amazing .. the flow is great .. the whole story and meaning.. i love it.. excellent job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =)

I love the rhymes. They really rhyme perfectly. Word of choice is excellent. I used to know the true meaning of care, trust and love. But two years ago, I lost my way. Everything just went downhill from there. Recently, I found myself again. I realize I've been asleep for a long time.

I wish I can continue teaching that special someone the true meaning of care, trust and love..