From the Inside

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There's a monster hidden inside me
It comes out to play in the light
It devours me at night.

It releases itself into someone
Who is sane but then disappears into no one
It's heart is obsolete,
But it's body is made of betrayal and deceit.

It's voice so violent but tender
Makes me look up and wonder
Is there a way out ?
Or should I stay to find out?

The monster inside me
Can hide within me
Only when its master is summoned
To retrieve the vanished.

Luminous in the darkness
Provides an emptiness,
To he who faces vindictiveness.
But it traps you in a wish to find an egress.