Comments : My Eternal Breath

  • 20 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    This is only my second love poem. I did the best I could to write it. I hope you enjoy reading my poems.

  • 20 years ago

    by Danielle

    it was a really good poem
    i really liked it and if u could plz read and comint and vote on some of my poems thnx

  • 20 years ago

    by julie

    tom cruise eh??? beautiful and amazing what a lucky girl to have such an inspirational poem writen about her.

  • 20 years ago

    by Richard Bottary

    Thanks Chris. From what I've read you have amazing wrtings as well. Sad part though...this really wasn't written to anyone inparticular. It mainly just came from the heart.

  • 20 years ago

    by Concealing Words

    That is a really good poem i really like it. very sweet and full of feelings, keep it up.

    thank you for the comment on my poem.

  • 20 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow...this was (once again) amazing! I had to make room for you on my favorites list!! Can't wait to read more!!

  • 20 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    salute =) dang who ever she is... she lucky :P:P:P its nice =) i liked everything about it... tucked with sweet words in it... def 5 =) i liked it...

    hope u pass by mine sometimes =) ciao ~LETISHIA~

  • 20 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Such a tender piece, I love it. Very romantic too. Good Job Babe

    --Sher