robyn your words are amazing, the rhyme doesn't matter from the very start im by far engulfed in the poem, you are amazing, you have such talent..i know you wil lgo far...good luck <33
-Mortalidaga

I really liked this poem....it actually reminds me of my own "no one's left" but it's completely different....so un-cliche I might say

The rhyme scheme doesnt matter...I was caught in the poem all the way through. if that is how you felt then you simply made a masterpiece with your feelings. Take care hun. xxx