Wow--that is incredible. I have an athiest friend that I've been witnessing to for a while. This really puts into perspective for me, what he must think and believe. Wonderful job!

I can say this is the best poem I have read!
Its not a poem saying "oh im depressed" But has so much tought put into it! well done. you managed to make the flow great, use excellent words and put it all together so well.

Greta work!

I really enjoyed it! most interresting poem ive read!

That was AWSOME! You are GREAT! KEEP IT UP!

As I've said before, I'm not one for religion. But you've definitley made it something worth reading. I love your perspective, even if it doesn't comply with my own. Great job

Take Care,
Renee

Your an amazing writer. every word goes perfectly with the rhyme. its so nice to just read a poem that has a good steady flow. awesome!

Awww..that was beautiful.
I loved how you decribed the universe, and eternity.
Very special.

Good Writing!
beth

This is one of your best poems! I like them all but this one has something else to it. It is so beautifully written with deep thoughts. Keep it up!

I really enjoyed the poem and sensed a definite flow and rhythm which is always a good thing. Thanks for the comment and congratulations on your publication. It is one of my many dreams to publish a book so I was hoping to get some advice and maybe you could read some more of my work and judge whether or not it's to a publishing standard. I would greatly appreciate it if you do get the time. Finally I have to say brilliant poem 5/5 =)

Amazingly written, There is no power like the power of imagination, it's the building block of creativity. Thank you and keep writing.

Wow! that was cool some very strong ideas portraied in a fantastic poem. I was a bit concerned when I saw the layout but as I was reading i found it to be interesting and a positive influence on the verse. Great work!!
Aaron (remo)

A really great poem. It really went into depth and makes the reader think. The flow and rhyming were both great. It was a beautiful piece overall. I liked it alot! Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee.

All i can say si "WOW!!!" great job. so much thought in one poem. i loved the choice of words! it was great! i wish i could come to conclusions like that. i totally agree with everything u put into this poem!!

Wow this one was a definate favorite by far. I loved the question that you were asking and the flow was so not forced! It all went together so very well it was perfect.........

-AnnMarie

A wonderful poem ,I agree by the way I think creation is the only logical conclusion, you bring that out very well.
thank you for reading mine and your comment.

I liked this, it's my favourite so far.

It's been a road for me to find my faith, and I do agree with a lot of you say here. I hope there is a God. Awesome poem man.

Another great poem... you're a great writer. 5/5

This my friend is definately as poetic as it gets, the flow of the words was amazing and many lines had 2-3 rhymes in each. The truth is we can never really know for sure what the truth of the world really is, all we can do is live life to the fullest and live it for ourselves not for god. Excellent job with this poem 5/5 nothing less is deserved GG23

Kinda reminded me of a rap.
also kinda reminded me of a poem that i would study and like...pick apart line by line at school. which basically means its good lol.
good job.

I too don't believe the universe happened by chance because even this comment came from someone, right?
Well done...