The eerie Path

by SarZz   Aug 4, 2004


Tracing the eerie path,
I stare at my feet,
They've ambled some long distance,
And so, where the two ends meet,

But now I'm just solitary,
Unaccompanied-All on my own,
I steadily look for a way,
That leads to the era of lone,

They may say I'm crazed,
But abide before u feel like it,
You'll find yourself all dazed,
When you've been betrayed and forcefully hit,

Stepping on me,
Like I was a rustled leaf,
You had no reason to tear me apart,
Because of your enmity and grief

I'm heading for the light,
But sable is all what I see,
It's too late now,
Because nothing is left inside of me...

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  • 20 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    another good poem, love how your use of vocab and imagery gives it a very mysterious effect

  • 20 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Great vocabulary! I loved your poem! Great job!

  • 20 years ago

    by Jacki

    Good Poem

  • 20 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I liked the rhythm and your vocabulary, as it is constantly challenging me to figure out just what the heck you are talking about. ;-) so would you mind telling me what a sable is? Because the only thing the dictionary says is that it is some promontory of southern Nova Scotia. Nice rhyming though, the only strange thing I found was "era of lone". It just doesn't sound very natural to me. Good poem though.

  • 20 years ago

    by julie

    great poem, the rhyming scheme works to your advantage!

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