Thrilling...I really enjoyed it! You should write more like this, especially if you enjoy it!!

Scared the crap out of me, reminded me a bit of the movie sixth sense at this one part where this woman ghost gets all pissed off and stuff. Anyways, I don't know why this is in the slang section, you didn't seem to use any words that would warrant that. I would suggest moving it, although im not sure what category it should go into.

o0o0o0 very creepy...i like it

Wow! that was a lovely story. Some thing different from the usual. I enjoyed every part of it. I thought the person was dreaming his past. But you got me wrong. Nice one thou.

creepy!

I liked this poem a lot. I haven't read many scary story poems. I now wish to read more :) Any ways, great poem, I liked the ending.

that was awsome.. but i kinda had a feeling how it would end.. oh well it was well written

Thank you for all your comments :)

This kind of gave me the chills. i liked how it told a story.5/5