Within My Soul

by HOLLY ARMER   Aug 4, 2004


Tormented and sad...
remembering the love we had.

Lonely and lost...
remembering the sacred line you crossed.

Betrayed and defeated...
remembering the way I was treated.

Crushed and depressed...
knowing this is just a test.

Recovering and glad...
realizing change isn't so bad.

Anticipation and bliss...
feeling someone else's kiss.

Excited and flattered...
gathering the pieces that were scattered.

Reborn and whole...
finding happiness within my soul!

*Any vote/comments appreciated*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    Very uplifting poem! I gave it another 5!

  • 20 years ago

    by PAUL HEWSON

    like the way u present this poem . u are a very good writter , it a poetic journey . and it gives me as a reader a very uplifting feeling .

  • 20 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    that is so beautiful..fantastic work..dont stop writing :)
    -Mortalidaga

  • 20 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    that is so beautiful..fantastic work..dont stop writing :)
    -Mortalidaga

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    I was not sure what word I wanted touse for this... so I peeked at the comments and I'm gonna steal Meena's word.... this was very rejuvenating!!

    I loved the flow of it..andhow it went from hopeless to hopeful....

    very well done!