by Danielle Aug 4, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Vast oceans crash in your eyes |
by EJ
that was really good!! the ending was great!! i have noticed you like water or more the ocean.. at least it has made an appearance in some of your writtings.. good!! bye bye EJ |
Startling, much as the rest. Your experience to weave an emotion, a tale, and or an idea radiates here. |
by David
I too love the the you described your feelings. |
by Jacki
I like the poems descriptions. Nicely done!!! |
by Robyn Park
That was awesome. I loved the rhyme scheme. Great poem. Keep it up |