That was awesome. I loved the rhyme scheme. Great poem. Keep it up

I like the poems descriptions. Nicely done!!!

I too love the the you described your feelings.
Very good, Very touching.
Nice flow.

Startling, much as the rest. Your experience to weave an emotion, a tale, and or an idea radiates here.
I can choose a favorite, but then as well make my one-by-one to praise you. (5)

that was really good!! the ending was great!! i have noticed you like water or more the ocean.. at least it has made an appearance in some of your writtings.. good!! bye bye EJ