If I told you "I love you"....

by Allen   Aug 4, 2004


If I told you "I love you"
would our friendship fade?
If I told you "I love you"
would you be happy or would you be mad??

So many thoughts I desire to share
so much feelings I want to reveal
They are all locked in my deepest dungeon
where their freedom I seal

Is it a twist of fate
that you are my ex's best friend
Does that make this love forbidden?
Should this love be banned??

If I told you "I love you"
would you turn the other way?
If I told you "I love you"
would you give your heart away??

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  • 19 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    hehe awesome poem..I like it ^_^ Keep writting!
    Shanney

  • 20 years ago

    by jennifer

    Beautiful poem Aleen, touched me deeply keep up your amazing words and remeber one things poems really don't have to ryme

  • 20 years ago

    by giggles

    crap i just told you a story you probably did not want to here srry
    anyways good not let me take that back fantastic poem please dont tell us that you cant write poetry cuz you can

  • 20 years ago

    by giggles

    omg u took my breathe away in this poem and i mean it i have the feelings for my friend and its been this way for 3 years i cant find awayto tell him and if i do will our friendship still be the same i have been there for him for 2 of his relationships and he always asked for my advice and i told him what i thought i would want and he never understood i just wish i could tell him

  • 20 years ago

    by martina foust

    this poem i love a whole bunch!!!! i could read it over and over very good job i cant wait to hear more

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