Aww!! this so amazing!! I loved it to death....that was kind of weiord becuase i started righting a poem about it being like 1 month since i talked to my best friend and it was like what i wanted to say you wrote and i i feel you felt ..ya know...Thats why your my favorite because you have no problem expressing yourself and all of these poems seem to relate to me and i love it!! This pome was so0o0o good...I gave you a five i wish i could give higher! Great JOb i'm glad your back friends with ya girl! Love ya lil sis!! Great Job!

Great job, thanks for the comments on my poems. But me and my friend did not just need some time apart. we needed to part forever. This poem is really good i like how it is two poems in one. it flowed just right. keep it up

WHOA Thats really sad Jennifer, i understand how it is tho some friendships grow together and others grow apart, im sure you and your friend tried to sort things out tho an hol onto those good memories you shared. Thank my bub Chels every word you write brings a smile to my face i hope everything is ok on your end of the world stay smiling babygurl! And thanks to everyone for taking the time to read and comment!

Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing!

~Grace

I really Liked your poem. SO much was said, so many emotions were within your words.. It brought tears to my eyes. I know few things about loss of friendship and trying to gain it back or just gaining it back.. You've done a beautiful job.
Check out some of my poems when you get a chance.... Keep up your good writing. I gave you a five:)

Libby

Thanks everyone - especially Chris you're one of my faves was so nice to get some returned feedback from an artist such as yourself...i will return the favour to you all you're all such an inspiration much luv xoxo

Wow.. I have only begun to read your vast collection of poems but so far you still fail to amaze me. Not only was that poem beautifully written and full of emotion but it kinda creeps me out a bit. I just made a comment on one of my poems that i wrote in a similar way. I wont assume this of you but it is true to me. Comments and vote are very nice. But the feeling, the sheer emotion put into the poem outweights all critisisms and praise

I fail to amaze you Semaran - oh how dissappointing I will just have to try harder - thanks all the same for your feedback and i agree the feeling and sheer emotion i place in each and every one of my pieces far outweighs all the critisim and praise - you are a smart man...

i wish this were true for me...:(