by TAinted vįŕťues Aug 5, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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i really like this especially the 5th stanza. it really stood out for me and there is a lot of great imagery from the metaphors you used . i like how there wasn't a specific rhyme scheme because where it did ryhme, it didn't seem forced. tc. xmollyxx |