nice poem ok

that is excellent i especially love 'i empty from within' :) keep up te good work!

WOW. this is great. i could feel the raw emotion you must have felt when writing this. i love this line "you wear this mask of innocence." the launguage is relatively simply but the words are so deep great job. xmollyxx

Woah that's awesome! I love it! 5/5

Keep it up, you're really talented!

BTW, thanks for the comment on my poem, much appreciated!

xox, PorteR

I love it! your writing about something real i know what your going through

I love it it is so good i love the end plz come and rate mine

Beautifull

thats all xXx