Very interesting. I'm beginning to appreciate these poetic stories. Nice and fun to read.

You need to watch out for these common mistakes.
* there, they're, and their *

We have a thread for commonly misspelled words and grammatical errors.
Here is the link: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/topic.html?topic_id=3780

thanks yeah thats my greatest downfall grammer.......i really suck

I enjoyed that poem. It was fun and reminded me of trolls. I had to get rid of those troll dolls when I was really little because they scared me. This poem reminds me why I was scared. Very cute.