You did a great job on this poem. I could relate to it so well it was kind of like reading abou myself but I know I wasn't. But great job it's one of my all time favorites. great job!

WOW...this poem is SO AMAZING!!! VERY powerful!!!! SO great, written so well, gave me chills.
your very talented!!!!!!!
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I can relate so much to this... excellent work u have such a talent!

Amy,

You really portray scared ppls lives in this. It touched me sooo much.

~Sammie

wow ...this poem was written very well...and is very sad...im very sorry...please come read some of my poems sometime and tell me what you think

awsome.. for some reason you have been ignorin me and i wanna tell you why i ask you for help.. its because i try to get better and everytime i look at your poems they are so amazing and i just want your opinion on how its going.. i dont want you to write it :-/ im sorry and i think i gave you the wrong idea.. anyways gud poem