umm i'm so so on this one. I really liked it started off.......But then it didn't keep the flow towards the ending.

Where did Sarah go?
I can not remember.
One thing I DO remember:
Where he went.
His body is still on the bed...
and I hold his head in my lap

That is the only part I didn't like.
What do you mean where did Sarah go?
I didn't know she left, so its a bit confusing for me. Maybe you can inlighten me on it.......