Mamar:
I don't know how old you are, and I usually check ages to be fair in my comments. Your poem was simple (which is sometimes the better read) and touching. I liked it very much.

thats so sad..:( aww v.v your such a good writer..dont stop writing..:(...<33

-Mortalidaga

i lost my dad when i was 14 and i can barley remember any thing about him that was good