by Baby B
Wow! I love this poem! Great Job! |
by Allen
...Great poem, emotions flows, I feel you sadness throught your words... I do hope this poem is not real.. for hurting yourself is not the right way to go... try let ur words release your depression... take care. |
by *Elizabeth*
WOW!!! This poem is SOO amazing!!! I totally understand. I LOVED This poem soo much!!! WOW...It was SOO awesome!! I could go on forever and ever about how super great this poem was!!! WOW!! |
by Danielle
I LOVE THIS POEM! Way to put your emotions into words...this is incredible |
by julie
That was so briliant, the rhymes worked incredibly well and it flows like a running stream, well done! |
by Madison
Great work! wow, you have alot of talent, keep up the good work! |
by !Chookie!
WOW!!! it was great, it was a bit weird in the begining but the end was AMAZING!!! keep writing!!! |
aww that was sad but yo poem was that thang |
by nikki
your so talented, wow, that was really good, and i totally relate to it, keep up the great work |
by Sammie Moore
WOW...thats all I can say is WOW |
thats so sad...but so beautifully written, awesome wok..your very talented..keep up the good work <33 |
by Lmay
That was totaly amazing, i luved reading it, it felt so ... emotional! :) |
by Marta
I want to thank all of you for your honest comments. This is the first time my poem was top rated! It was actually a surprise to me. Thank you all for your support and loyalty. It means soo much. Once again thanks a million! :) |
Emotionally i read this, thinking of myself in your shoes, untill i got up to the point where you cut yourself. My best friend killed himself. And im not being mean to you, or your poem, but i just get jittery when ''cutting'' is expressed in many poems. People dont understand most of the time that it hurts soo bad, when someone so close to you is lost by one simple mistake, that would have ended up okay in the end. Loved the poem though. Thanks for your time. |
this is an amazing poem, I can just feel the sadness when I read it. Nice job and keep up the good work |
by Ski
Fantastic! But I really really hope that you don't physically do these things and that it is all taken out with your writing. Nothing is worth harming yourself, please remember that. Take care always. xx |
by Danielle
Wow, that was so brilliantly written :( I'm so so sorry if you really do go thorugh this every day, I can't imagine the pain of just cuttin every day. I really can't. So again, Im sorry. Your a great writer though. Keep it up. |
by Jamie
wow...i have chills runnign through my body...amazing words...touche dmy heart, keep writing. |
by Marta
Thank you all so much for the honest comments. And yeah, I guess I do go through this everyday. Although I'm seeking help, I hope I'll get through. Once again, thanks for your comments, it means soooo much to me. |
by creasy
great poem!! keep it up!! :) |