omg this poem is excellent it has such a good flow to it! its a beautiful poem filled with emotion but put across brilliantly as a poem great work 5/5
bec xXx
oh and sorry i would comment some more poems but i dont hav much time comment u bak later promise

This has good feeling, but I think that the rhyming lines need more length consistency when read out loud. It seems like when someone write a rhyming poem, it needs to have really great rhythym to sound good to me. 'Unwanted and alone
More time to spend
Utterly unknown.'

Perhaps you could switch alone and unknown.
Keep writing though!

Hey gr8 poem, i noe exactly wat ur tlking about.