Hey, u have a really great way with words, i loved ur poem although it made me sad.
~Nadiya~

this is a very well written poem, I love the way that you can capture the pain and the longing for a better day. Nice job keep up the good work

this poem is beautifull. :) you have great talent...i love your rhyming..it all fits perfect..line after line..you are a fantastic writer..:) good job :)
-Mortalidaga