1st line, 2nd to last stanza the word is heart not hear...site won't let me edit the poem right now

Its real cool....i must say...just keep it up!

You are a genius, another great poem :)

Beautiful! Very well written! So many truths!

Stanza 5 is especially powerful!

Greatwork!

that was a really good poem. i liked how you defined strength piece by piece. i thought that was awesome. the rhyming was good also! take care:)

that was a really good poem. i liked how you defined strength piece by piece. i thought that was awesome. the rhyming was good also! take care:)

I love it but i dont really agree with strength being forgetting

Wow that was so good, holy shit, keep up the good work

Awesome!!!

Very good poem. it helped me out a lot.

Ho-LY- CraP! i absolutely love this poem, can't compare to anything I've read on this site. I'd like to thank you too. I have a lot of things in which i could be more strong in, and your words have made me change my mind on quite a few things...thank you :)
~speachless01

Ho-LY- CraP! i absolutely love this poem, can't compare to anything I've read on this site. I'd like to thank you too. I have a lot of things in which i could be more strong in, and your words have made me change my mind on quite a few things...thank you :)
~speachless01

It's obvious this poem is a beauty
Just by reading this one very poem I can tell you are so talented, and writing poems is your gift
I think this poem means a lot to many people, and really everyone who's loosing faith in life should read this
I just wanted this to tell you
Greets, Milou

Btw: I gave you 5.

Greatest poem I've seen in A Long long long time keep it up