wow i really liked this poem! it was really good...please if you dont mind come and tell me what you think of some of my poems...thanks a lot and keep writing you are really good!

gotta agree with lucifer awesome it as asolutely awesome

Well done 8-) Keep writing.

wow, i aktually envisioned the whole thing. great writing

I love this poem a lot....i really love it...

ps: Could u plz ceck out my poem "The nightmare chamber" it would really mean a lot if u could check it out...thanx--taintedvirtues

Another well written poem from you.... i like this one.

the rhyme scheme was great and it flowed nicely.

good job.5/5

I just came accross this little gem and had to add it to my favourites. Great rhyming and pace. I really love the paper theme that runs throughout. It portrays the fragility of it all. This is compelling, emotional and dynamic and is an an immediate favourite. Well done on an excellent piece. Milly x

Beautiful structured poem, wonderfully written.

Hi there, I really like this poem, I find myself drawn to darker poems at the moment, the rhyming is spot on and when read out loud it really carries weight. Regards Ink

This poem made me feel really sad. It really struck a cord with me and pulled at my heart strings.