Hey thats one cool poem, I don't really know Timothy... Im a bit new, but I do hope he comes back for he sounds like one awesome person to be friend with :)

Great poem, Lisa! You captured Tim very well in that!

It will be a great loss if he does not return

Very nice poem

I'm sorry for your loss, this is a fine dedication to your friend.

As far as advice in my comment, i felt that the flow of the poem was interupted by the irratic syllable count....almost as if you couldn't decide between free verse, or structured balanced work.

The last line of the first stanza is a classic example..if you read it out loud...you should find that is doesn't quite flow right...because there are one to many syllables.

Be well.

Wow, what a great tribute to your special friend, if I didnt know any better, I would swear you two were married..haha! anyways, I love his work too, you totally rock Lisa, you are on my favorites list. Denise