by Brandon Evans Aug 5, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
new love
Shown me life known only in dreams |
by Pius
Great Job as well on your side |
Dream and Reality meeting together... A wish of most the people. Really beautiful.. The poem has a great flow..Good try. |
by Eibutsina
terrific job - well written and very descriptive and effective for what you were trying to achieve with the sonnet! I loved it and was well worth a five |
hey nice work buddy. Don't worry about how the pattern is. I'm sure others will get it. It's all about the feeling really. Keep it up. |
Wish we could edit again... |