Wish we could edit again...

The correct pattern is:
AaaB-cccB-dddB-AB

hey nice work buddy. Don't worry about how the pattern is. I'm sure others will get it. It's all about the feeling really. Keep it up.

terrific job - well written and very descriptive and effective for what you were trying to achieve with the sonnet! I loved it and was well worth a five

Dream and Reality meeting together... A wish of most the people. Really beautiful.. The poem has a great flow..Good try.

Great Job as well on your side
Keep writing