Whew! That's a pretty terrifying piece of work but I enjoyed reading it. Good job!

oh my god eirsa please tell me this is not true!!! If it is im soo0o0 speechless! ANd im so very sorry for you..What a horrible things to happen for you and ur son! I have no idea of what to say but words of comfort...I really hope you get through it and i hope its not true..you did an amazing job on this girl....and as much as i hate to say it this is my new fave poem of yours! yopu expressed urself so deeply and thats awsome...I hope you get through i really do..love ya lots! MUAH**

Hey Thanks for your comments Lydia, much appreciated. And chelsea my baby sis i'll email you and thankyou for leaving a comment and some constructive critism MWAH Much luv for ya xoxox Eirisa xoxoxox

***wiping tears***

god... salute for this one... hands down... im speechless, hmm very well written, flowed nicely,,, tyte... neat... blah* so on... i really liked this one... i loved everything from the start till the end... again... 5 ***** fo this one... much love

oh forgot to thank u =) thanx for the comment =)much appreciated... again this poem rocks...

A Great one! Nicely rhymed!!!

Thanks Leitishia and Robert - i have checked out both yoru profiles and your amazing writers - i feel somewhat privilidged to have you comment on my work so thanks xoxxx

wow, this was one of THE BEST poems i ahve read on here so far! great work! it was truely amazing! God Bless

Wow that was very emotional. You were very brave to right something like this if it is true. God bless you!!!