by Eibutsina Aug 5, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
How do you know you have met our partner for life? |
by Eibutsina
Thanks everyone i look forward to returning the favour to you all! |
by Melissa
You're poem is good. I really like the way you've written it. It makes it interesting to read. I'd like to read more. Check out mine sometime if you get chance, thanks.x |
Nice one!!! |
by Eibutsina
Thanks to you all for your feedback - love poems are usually a lil outta my league im better at writing about dark more depressing issues but with feedback like this! I should try positive stuff more often, every single comment here has touched my heart and made me a better writer THANKS Much Luv xox |
by Eibutsina
Thanks for your feedback Semaran, you do have a valid point, maybe ill edit that into over the weekend - i really appreciated constructive critisim such as what you have give me so THANKS...id appreciate it on my other pieces if you have time :o) And Libby once more thank you looking forward to seeing some of your new work so i can return the favour, your words make me smile thankyou so much for your time :o) Much Luv One Luv Risa xoxoxo |